2009上海中考英语作文题目及范文精选

　　2009上海中考英语作文题目及范文精选！2017上海中考倒计时，英语作文占英语考试一定分值比例，评分档之间的分差不容小觑。下文上海爱智康初中频道搜集整理了2009上海中考英语作文题目及范文精选，供学习参考 。

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　　2009年上海中考英语作文题:I want to do something for my school

　　以“I want to do something for my school（我想为学校做一件事）” 为题写-篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。

　　注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

　　学生习作：

　　I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple. But I don't think so. Our teacher said, "School is your home, you should keep it clean."But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now, do you think it is simple?

　　点评：

　　此文分三层，先提出自己的观点，然后写出自己怎么做的，最后写了我可以让我的学校变得干净让每个人宽恕我，结尾紧扣全文，写出我会怎么做。

　　全文立意新颖，区别于传统的作文，有自己的生活背景，写出了从我原来是怎么做到现在的转变过程，没有重大的语法错误，是一篇值得参考的好文章。

　　例文：

　　My school is in the centre of the city and the air around is not fresh enough because of the heavy traffic. Our school hasn’t noticed it, so I want to plant more trees in my school to take in polluted gases. I will use my savings to buy some plants and seeds. In addition, I will call on my schoolmates to be responsible for them when I graduate from school. I hope that my school will be cleaner and prettier.

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