2014年上海中考英语范文

2014年上海中考英语范文
 

This time next year

Time flows like running water. At this very moment next year, frankly speaking, I will definitely finish my final exam during my first year in senior high school and start my journey in an ideal place :Phuket Island.
As a keen traveller, what attracts me most is travelling for the reason that travelling can expand my horizons and enrich my life. Moreover, the clean atmosphere, the closeness to nature, gentle pace of living and twittering of birds in Phuket Island will exactly leave me a deep impression. Last but not least, the unique south-east Asian food and friendly people will enable me to acquire the fantastic local culture and customs there.
It is travelling that will benefit me this time next year. Never will I forget this valuable and memorable experience.
 

作文分析：
1. Time flows like running water. 时光飞逝，用语独具一格。

2. frankly speaking 动名词作插入语，非常恰如其分。

3. At this very moment next year 用词贴切，very显得非常原汁原味。

4. start my journey 开启一段旅程，照应下文的travelling。

5. As a keen traveller 表达非常地道，符合英美国家的语言思维。
 

6. what attracts me most is travelling for the reason that travelling can expand my horizon and enrich my life. 表语从句嵌套原因状语从句，体现对于不同从句炉火纯青的运用。
 

7. Moreover, the clean atmosphere, the closeness to nature, gentle pace of living and twittering of birds in Phuket Island will exactly leave me a deep impression. 四大平行结构大气上档次。leave me a deep impression 灵活巧妙运用考纲词汇。
 

8. acquire the fantastic local culture and customs there 了解当地非常棒的文化和习俗。双c用得恰如其分。
 

9. It is travelling that will benefit me this time next year. 强调句的合理运用。
 

10. Never will I forget this valuable and memorable experience. 倒装句用得滴水不漏。 valuable和memorable 押尾韵，体现了较强的驾驭英语语言的能力。